Three new chapters on my website!

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Three new chapters on my website!

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Hey guys!

I don't know if anyone is exited but I sure am!

Three new chapters on my website just now.
http://www.geocities.com/dead2eat/thest ... tml?200518

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Comments and criticism are welcome! :D

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Post by ottoatm »

WOW!

Three chapters at once! You are not slow, thats for sure... cool!!

I'll be sure to check it out - good to see more people writing stories!
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Post by TheOrk »

Awsome job Graynar! My favorite part of the three new chapters was the seige of Shardon. Battles are fun with lots of pictures :wink:

Keep up the great work!
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Post by Shadow »

Wow! Looks good! I will catch up on the whole story after I finish Ikros. You asked for criticism and I shall only give a slight suggestion. Make you type just a bit smaller. It looks like you have it at something like 18pt, try downsizing it to about 13-14pt, that way you have type that is not taking away from the glory of the pictures. Good luck!!!
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Thanks for the comments guys!

I made the font smaller, took a while, but it is smaller.

Please tell me if you like the smaller font better,

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Post by Shadow »

That looks much better! I finished Ikros and I'm now onto yours!
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great job!!! love the undead army and now i see where your avatars from :)
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