The Kingdom of Lasharron

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The Kingdom of Lasharron

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Hello! I am new so I don't know if this will be a good topic, but I wanted to tell about my LEGO Castle story: The Kingdom Of Lasharron! It follows the adventures of a young knight, Kurek Halfelven, and his companions as they search the kingdom for "The Elements", the physical manifestations of:Rock, Earth, Fire, Water, Ice, and Air(These will be represented by Mini Toa), so they can save their land from Golden Death, an evil lich who is attacking the kingdom. The many charactors include Kurek, Hawk, Atlanta, Barko, Kyron, Hans, Richard, Moro(These are Kurek's comapanions), Drakeskull, King Rentor, Prince Romulus, Sharkhelm, The Shogun, Finch, King Shindera, Satcho, Cackling Drew, Kirp, Exxron, Agron, Tereasa, all spinning around in my mind.....
Does anyone like the sound of my story? Any questions, suggestions, and feedback are welcome. :roll:
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Another one! Nicely-diddely.

Sounds very interesting, but as I usually do, I would recommend the story to become more than just a good vs evil tale.

As for the names, they are great, but perhaps a little explanation since they dont too much by themselves. :wink:
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Thanks. Now, about those names...
Kurek-A young knight. The main charactor. Half elf.
Hawk-A sarcastic ninja. One of the last two ninja.
Atlanta-A huntress. Very good warrior. Kurek's crush.
Barko-A barbarian from anther kingdom, Kazig. Very strong.
Kyron-A centaur healer. Uses a crossbow.
Hans-The castle gardener. Uses a spear.
Richard-Another knight. The "Richard The Strong" minifig from KK1.
Moro-A young wizard. Satcho's apprentice.
Drakeskull-A mean and nasty knight. Wears a UFO helmet.
King Rentor-The King of Lasharron.
Prince Romulus- The Prince of Lasharron. Want's to go into battle.
Sharkhelm-The leader of the knights. Wears Viktor Krum shark head.
The Shogun-The leader of the samurai.Has a big moustache.
Finch-Another ninja. Female. Minor charactor.
King Shindera-The King of Kazig.
Satcho-The court wizard. Moro's master.
Cackling Drew-An insane magician. Not in the story so far.
Kirp-The court jester. Always carries juggling balls.
Exxron-The knight who trained Kurek. "Santis" armour.
Agron-Another knight.Minor charactor.Married to Tereasa.
Tereasa-Only female knight.Married to Agron.Minor charactor.
Well, that's all the people I mentioned. Hope this helps!

EDIT-Story update: I am currently working on chapter nine. It will involve flowers, Visorak(by a different name), and a lake.
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I think is is a good idea. The characters sound interesting, and I would love to see a story made from them.
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