Jellybean--Chapter 3: Junk Mail

by **eNiGMa** » Tue Jul 25, 2006 4:21 pm

Today we meet Frank the Mailman. Enjoy!

This chapter was going to be bigger, but I cut it in half so I could present it to you and get some work done on my entry for the Storytelling Contest. Special thanks go to Fry_slayer for pointing me to better word bubbles.

by **Fry_slayer** » Tue Jul 25, 2006 8:52 pm

Guy in Vla mask....
Did I smell a plot? :lol:

Keep up the good work

by **lil Jon** » Tue Jul 25, 2006 9:49 pm

I saw that on brickshelf earlier today. Great work. Frank the mail man is an interesting character... You should keep him in the story.

by **Danju the Clever** » Wed Jul 26, 2006 8:33 am

AARP? What is AARP?

by **ottoatm** » Wed Jul 26, 2006 11:19 am

Danju the Clever wrote:AARP? What is AARP?

Ha ha... that was quite funny... I believe it's something like "American Association of Retired People"... or something like that... Enigma seems to be poking fun at Danju's age

... classic, but I have to admit the part with the sword... ha ha... I guess that's a dead horse I will just never get tired of kicking, but I always laugh when I see someone make this joke.

Good job... seems to be leading up to something big.

by **smcginnis** » Wed Jul 26, 2006 12:09 pm

Great chapter, eNiGMa. I love that horse joke, and the part about 'come to Ankoria' is really funny. I agree, these speech bubbles are much better. The only thing I would fix would be in frame a4, since Danju is speaking first, make his bubble above Frank's. Looking forward to the next chapter!

~smcginnis

by **eNiGMa** » Fri Jul 28, 2006 7:04 pm

Thank you all for your comments! Chapter four won't be out for a little while yet, so I'm glad you enjoyed this one.

And we will meet Frank again....

by **Remyth** » Fri Jul 28, 2006 10:59 pm

Great chapter! I love it! I like the whole idea!

Great work, keep it up!

hope to see chapter 4 out fairly soon...

by **ragnarok** » Mon Jul 31, 2006 6:41 am

Do I sense some competition with Fry's series?

Anyway good job Nathan! I like it a lot.

by **eNiGMa** » Wed Aug 02, 2006 2:48 pm

ragnarok wrote:Do I sense some competition with Fry's series?

Nah, me and Fry are cool.

Anyway, chapter four might be out sooner than I planned. I haven't started on it yet, but I might in the next week or so.

by **TheOrk** » Mon Aug 07, 2006 8:43 pm

Great job eNiGMa!

This one is easily as good as the previous ones. The Ankoria bit was classic. :wink:

Jellybean--Chapter 3: Junk Mail

Jellybean--Chapter 3: Junk Mail

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