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Great work Graynar. I can't wait to read more. My favorite character is the crownie with the plant for a helmet.

Great stuff. Your script is excellent and I like your backgrounds and photography. Keep it coming

Only thing I'd question is the use of 'prick' in chapter one...was that word really necessary?

- Matt

Thanks for the replies everyone! They are greatly appreciated!

Sir Kohran wrote:Great stuff. Your script is excellent and I like your backgrounds and photography. Keep it coming

Only thing I'd question is the use of 'prick' in chapter one...was that word really necessary?

- Matt

Well I could have used a milder word, but I don't see how the use of that word was more offencive then the bloody death of the worker. Or the severed hand for that matter.

Maybe I should have used the word "Brick" instead.

Well I could have used a milder word, but I don't see how the use of that word was more offencive

It just took me out of the flow of the story for a little bit; it didn't seem in keeping with your style up until then. Not a big deal.

the bloody death of the worker. Or the severed hand for that matter.

Well yes, but these are just in Lego form.

Maybe I should have used the word "Brick" instead.

- Matt

You know what dude, I just read this again and appreciated it even more the second time. These are awesome. I especially love Nobalz intro and his name. Haha! Nobalz.

Please don't stop there! When do we to see another installment!?

Well yes, but these are just in Lego form.

True, true.

You know what dude, I just read this again and appreciated it even more the second time. These are awesome. I especially love Nobalz intro and his name. Haha! Nobalz.

Haha, glad you liked it!

Please don't stop there! When do we to see another installment!?

I don't intend on stopping, but I will be unable to work on it for the rest of August. Unfortunately, 10 hour days at work are eating up all my time. But I should continue again full time in September.

Just curious, what software are you doing your comic with? If you need some tips on graphics just ask, myself and hubby dable a bit with lego based comics as well. You've done a great job. The story is fun.

Niki

siabur wrote:Just curious, what software are you doing your comic with? If you need some tips on graphics just ask, myself and hubby dable a bit with lego based comics as well. You've done a great job. The story is fun.

Niki

Hey, thanks for the reply!

I use a free downloadable photoshop called the Gimp for all my special effects and picture editing and I use MS Paint for the speech bubbles and text.

Good news guys, you can watch the General Nobalz trailer on Youtube!

http://ca.youtube.com/watch?v=-3er67f5Ey0

Hope you enjoy it!

These are really good! I love them! Nobalz lol!

Here is chapter 3 guys! Hope you enjoy it! Also note, like the other chapters, there is some swearing.



Comments are appreciated!

Very nice work! I'm too lazy to be specific about what I liked but it was a nice read and the illustrations are very rich. I hope you keep at it.

PS: I don't know why but I really liked the big clock in the outpost room.

lego in a comic
revolutionary.

This is a great story. Its hilarious.

B.T.W. I hate to be a bringer of bad news, but the youtube video has been taken off due to a copyright claim.

Thanks for the replies everyone!

B.T.W. I hate to be a bringer of bad news, but the youtube video has been taken off due to a copyright claim.

Wow that sucks...I didn't even recieve a message that it had been removed -I had no idea is was gone. Soon I won't have any videos left on Youtube.