CCCV Entry: The Death of Romeo and Juliet

Maedhros · Post by **Maedhros** » Fri Dec 21, 2007 9:34 am

"We see the grounds whereon these woes do lie;
But the true ground of all these piteous woes
We cannot without circumstance descry."

After having been alerted by the page of Paris, the city guards of Verona come upon the Mausoleum of the Capulets and find the dead bodies of Paris, Romeo and Juliet.

Deeplinks:

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Let me know what you think!

Tower of Iron Will · Post by **Tower of Iron Will** » Fri Dec 21, 2007 3:36 pm

Are those Fleshies? Other than that it's great, nice job. Don't forget her dagger.
-Tower

DARKspawn · Post by **DARKspawn** » Fri Dec 21, 2007 8:28 pm

Fleshies as they are supposed to be ... dead

I really like the succession of shots in the folder, very well presented, & I also like this studless fad you are on recently, Jonas, keep it up

doc069 · Post by **doc069** » Fri Dec 21, 2007 9:52 pm

Well done sir, well done.

I especially like the tile work on the ramp up to the door.

Lee

Spongey · Post by **Spongey** » Fri Dec 21, 2007 10:09 pm

Very well done. An excellent all-round creation.

LORD DOOM · Post by **LORD DOOM** » Fri Dec 21, 2007 11:57 pm

Wow Jonas. I like this a lot. Great images although I think the first one may be a touch too dark or need a touch of contrast. But it does give a great atmosphere. The studlessness is great and the red tiles for blood build right into the floor is cool. The fig posing and action in this is great. I like how one of the soldiers is holding his sword by it's handguard. Makes it appear as if it's hanging at his side. Excellent MOC Jonas. The building too is very cool. All around astonishment.

MORE I SAY! MORE!

(EDITED IN PS- Hey, question. May I use that roof design? I absolutely love it! It's fantastic!)

Maedhros · Post by **Maedhros** » Sat Dec 22, 2007 9:17 am

Thanks for the kind word everyone!

Tower of Iron Will wrote:Are those Fleshies? Other than that it's great, nice job.

DARKspawn wrote:Fleshies as they are supposed to be ... dead

Exactly. They convey that deathly pallor perfectly, don't they?

DARKspawn wrote:I also like this studless fad you are on recently, Jonas, keep it up

Hehe, studless fad indeed. We'll see if I ever get over it

LORD DOOM wrote:Wow Jonas. I like this a lot. Great images although I think the first one may be a touch too dark or need a touch of contrast.

I'll just blame the winter, shall I?

(EDITED IN PS- Hey, question. May I use that roof design? I absolutely love it! It's fantastic!)

Of course! How would we ever get anywhere if we all just kept our ideas to ourselves

kelderic · Post by **kelderic** » Sun Dec 23, 2007 9:47 pm

Overall, very nice. What I really like, though, is the sloped ramp. It looks tiled, but the fact that it is a ramp, instead of the normal stairs, makes it very cool.

Kelderic

tbaixinho · Post by **tbaixinho** » Sat Jan 05, 2008 1:41 am

The photos sequence is really good...intense, I would say.

Lovely

AmperZand · Post by **AmperZand** » Thu Jan 10, 2008 5:35 pm

What!? You mean they die at the end?

Now you've spoiled it!

(Just kidding

)

Very accomplished creation. I agree with doc069 and kelderic about the sloping floor - especially nicely done.

On the torch, what part did you use to attach the bar to the flame?