https://www.flickr.com/photos/113661528 ... 783245213/
please look through the few photos and read the story
any comments, suggestions about both the Moc and the story please share them
Thankyou
story im just begining (still needs a title)
Re: story im just begining (still needs a title)
Nice work! I don't think a son would say that to his dad, but other than that, great story!
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Re: story im just begining (still needs a title)
thankyou. i revised that bit it was harsher than that before haha.
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Re: story im just begining (still needs a title)
You have good start so far, keep it going..
Power corrupts, and absolute power corrupts absolutely!
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Despise learning and make everyone pay for your ignorance.
The water that floats a ship is the same that sinks it.
My LEGO figures keep me from being evil, drat!!
Re: story im just begining (still needs a title)
god been over a year since posted this been too busy to build but have still been collecting castle pieces and minifigs hopefully should get something built soon (fingers crossed)
so my story should continue and hopefully have a title (got a few ideas) so keep your eye out
marcus
so my story should continue and hopefully have a title (got a few ideas) so keep your eye out
marcus
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Re: story im just begining (still needs a title)
I really liked your story. It's a great start, but it leaves me wanting to know what happens next. Keep it up. You have a great start!
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Re: story im just begining (still needs a title)
I read the story.. I really liked it. But i think , you still need to work on it. The images are amazing.
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