Photos of Lord's first MOC(unfinished)

[Lord]

Hey everbody, just wanted to post some pictures of my first MOC. Please let me know what you think .



http://lordslegocreations.blogspot.com

[daggerblood]

Excellent creation. I like the pathway. The landscaping is interesting, it looks blocky but still realisticish. I really like that little fountain. You did a great job on this, you packed in details, but didn't make it too complex.

[Lord]

Thank you. It took me a very long time to find all the 1x1 cyndrical plates to make the pathway. Glad you like it

[Donut]

This is excellent for a first MOC. I like how the tower is built upon a small hill. It is a little blurry in the few pictures listed before but all the rest is great! Good work!

[Prince Imdol]

The pictures are very blurry and the lighting is bad, but we all get better as we go on.

I suggest organising those colors a little more. I know you probably are running out of pieces, but maybe you should try building smaller. The landscaping is exellent. So the only work is the exterior of the building.


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[RichardAM]

A really good first-attempt, and i'm sure, a lot better than mine!

The construction and details seem really solid, and the interior nicely detailed. I think you could benefit from sloping the landscape however- it's stepped currently and rather unnatural. That said, the foliage and plants are nicely placed.

A tripod (or a steady hand!) couldn't hurt either. I think good presentation has a lot to do with the overall success of a MOC, but most of all it allows the viewers to see more clearly some of the better details of the MOC. You could benefit from this a lot.

Regardless, nice work!

[Lord]

I agree that the pictures aren't that great. Still trying to learn the basics of of my digital camera and the lighting isn't that great either hopefully when I finish the castle completely I'll have better pictures .