First official MOC

[Fingolfin]

Hey there... so this is my first official MOC. Heres is the story:

The Lion Kingdom and the Kingdom of the Crown are two contries that are sepperated by a river. The two kingdoms have always been allies, so when the Lion Kingdom was overthrown by the Necromancer and his army of the undead, orcs, and mercenaries, the surviving Lion Knights fled to the Kingdom of the Crown to seek the Kings help. The King granted their request and gathered an army to attack the necromancer...

http://www.brickshelf.com/cgi-bin/gallery.cgi?f=442144

Please let me know what you think

[Sid]

could you post some deep links? the folder is not yet public. I like your little story though.

[babyjawa]

For your first MOC, this is quite good. I like the fact that you used a brick built tree instead of the "norm" of using the pre-made leaves. I do feel that you could've added a rock or another object in the water, as it is a little plain.

I love the grass hanging over the edge of the rocks. It's a nice touch and my favorite part.

[eilonwy77]

The tree is really nice, and I like the way you put bricks on the underside of the bridge. You've got quite a lot of action going on here. Thanks for sharing your MOC, and I look forward to seeing your second "official MOC".

[Bruce N H]

Hey,

Nice MOC. I like the grass angled over the sides, the depth of the gully, and the tree especially. Lots of action there. If I had one suggestion it would be to think a little more about what figs you place where. It's a little unclear what the 'sides' are in the battle. Also, the general suggestion that it is better to take photographs against a neutral background - e.g. take your pictures in front of a blank wall, or drape a sheet or towel behind the model - that way the details of your MOC aren't obscured by the random objects in the kitchen behind the MOC.

Bruce