A Teaser for my Story

Ja_izzle · Post by **Ja_izzle** » Tue Feb 01, 2005 8:17 pm

Heres the main banner on the website on which I am hosting my story. The story is entitled
"The Moonrise Chronicles" as you can see in the banner.
It's a classic tale of the fall of a kingdom, and the rebirth of a kingdom under the guidence of Rowanwood, the prince of Prophecies..... it will probably be a while til the story gets up, but you know how it is.

I made it smaller for this posting... normally it's 25 % larger.

The critism that i would give myself is that it is kind of plain, and maybe needs another character in the pic.

Comments apprieciated.

Jason

forester3291 · Post by **forester3291** » Tue Feb 01, 2005 9:10 pm

Cool. I really like teh backround for the banner. Sounds like a cool story! Can't wait to see the first chapter!

Looks great to me!

Cyclonis · Post by **Cyclonis** » Wed Feb 02, 2005 7:40 am

when will it be ready? it looks great

Ja_izzle · Post by **Ja_izzle** » Wed Feb 02, 2005 8:51 pm

It might be a while til the story is worked out for online viewing, i still need to bulk up on pieces so that my pics will enhance the story, but when i get it done, i'll be sure to let everyone here know.

Jason

venvorskar · Post by **venvorskar** » Sun Jul 17, 2005 12:06 am

I can't wait! I have watched your website with interest, and have not seen any progress, untill now!

Lord_Of_The_LEGO · Post by **Lord_Of_The_LEGO** » Sun Jul 17, 2005 12:10 am

venvorskar wrote:I can't wait! I have watched your website with interest, and have not seen any progress, untill now!

Ja_Izzle is no longer working on this story. He has sold all his LEGO too.

venvorskar · Post by **venvorskar** » Sun Jul 17, 2005 12:20 am

Lord_Of_The_LEGO wrote:Ja_Izzle is no longer working on this story. He has sold all his LEGO too.

How could he sell it?

!!! Why did he start if he is not going to finish?

eNiGMa · Post by **eNiGMa** » Sun Jul 17, 2005 6:56 am

venvorskar wrote:Why did he start if he is not going to finish?

Is anything ever "finished"?

It's like the bicycle. Someone invented it, then they died. Eventually, another person came along and said "bikes are cool, but I'd like to see gridlock." Thus, the car was born (followed by rush-hour traffic). So maybe the sudden ending of this story will eventually turn out for the better?

venvorskar · Post by **venvorskar** » Sun Jul 17, 2005 1:17 pm

Oh, then I could finish it.

Does he ever intend to finish?

Lord_Of_The_LEGO · Post by **Lord_Of_The_LEGO** » Mon Jul 18, 2005 6:46 pm

venvorskar wrote:Oh, then I could finish it. Does he ever intend to finish?

I doubt it, since Ja_izzle is no longer posting, and has, I repeat, sold all his LEGO. Nor I think would it be the polite or nice to just "take over" his story.

Ja_izzle · Post by **Ja_izzle** » Mon Jul 18, 2005 10:36 pm

Wow, i had no idea that my story had had such a large following. Yes, i am sorry to say that Lord of the Lego is right, i am currently.....Lets say "delayed"... on my progress of my story because of the fact that i have sold all of my Legos to Bannear, another Classic Castle AFOL, and while i sorta regret this transaction, i had more pressing needs come up in which i had to look around my room and decide "What can Go"....unfortunatly, the Legos were the second thing to go.. i also sold all my video game stuff.... i guess i'm just having to grow up...

but while I have sold my legos, Lego definately has not abandoned me... for a couple weeks ago, i received a hand addressed package from Lego... now this is strange (because) it was hand addressed, but also strange (because) i had never ordered anything.. Upon opening it, i was estatic to learn that i had been chosen to be a member of the Lego Lab R.A.T.S., where Lego sends me free lego sets that have not been released yet, and i review them and send my review back to Lego, where it might appear in the September Lego Magazine. I've received one set so far, the Urban Avenger Vs. Raptor, and it was a pretty cool set, but i am guarenteed to receive more sets so my lego collection can begin amassing again. I kept the two main characters of the story, Emperor Ironclaw, and Prince Rowanwood, so the story may still take place, but sorry to say i would be very offended if anyone "Took Over" my story, because they had no idea where i was going with this, i had 17 chapters already planned, and it was going to be a companion novel to one written by Geno.. But i have since then discovered another Species of Lego Minifig, and that will influence my story greatly, But with the will of Emperor Ironclaw, the Wisdom of Rowanwood, and the Might of Chief (Name not known Yet) you will see something like a teaser chapter at least, or maybe i'll shorten the story.......eventually.

Thanks for the concern.
-Jason .... a lifetime Lego fan

Edited by admin. Please do not post all in red and in a font size other than default. Thanks!

venvorskar · Post by **venvorskar** » Mon Jul 18, 2005 11:26 pm

Congratulations on becoming a lab rat!

When I said I could take over your story, did you notice the

emoticon? I did not seriously mean that I would do your story, I was saying that sarcasticaly. I wish I had become a lab rat.

Ja_izzle · Post by **Ja_izzle** » Tue Jul 19, 2005 8:16 pm

venvorskar wrote:Congratulations on becoming a lab rat!

Thanks, i was pretty excited, as you can well believe.

venvorskar wrote:When I said I could take over your story, did you notice the emoticon? I did not seriously mean that I would do your story, I was saying that sarcasticaly.

No i did not notice the emoticion, and i wasn't mad or anything... i was just stating, that i would not appreciatate anyone taking over my story.

venvorskar wrote:I wish I had become a lab rat.

Maybe next time, but if you look in this months Brickmaster Magazine, you will see that there are at least 5 different building contests you can enter to win any number of prizes.

Jason

venvorskar · Post by **venvorskar** » Tue Jul 19, 2005 8:58 pm

I haven't gotten my Brickmaster yet(but I am a member). When did your's come? And even if I am not a lab rat myself, it is nice to know that someone wins these Lego contests, because I have entered almost every one since 1999, and I have not won any of them.

Ja_izzle · Post by **Ja_izzle** » Wed Jul 20, 2005 7:05 pm

venvorskar wrote:I haven't gotten my Brickmaster yet(but I am a member). When did your's come?

I got mine about 2 or 3 days ago...

venvorskar wrote: And even if I am not a lab rat myself, it is nice to know that someone wins these Lego contests, because I have entered almost every one since 1999, and I have not won any of them.

Hey i've only entered two contests with lego ever, and i won one... so if you've been entering for 6 years, you gotta wim at least once soon!

Jason