Thanks for your feedback so far - I'm glad that people seem to like it so far. I'm working on chpt. 3 at the moment.
First, it took me an extremly long time for me to load the pages. Even though the pictures are reletively small, they still take a long time to load.
I was afraid this might be the case - I saved the images at a very high quality rate, which accounts for their slow loading time. I'll be saving the next set at a lower quality rate, hopefully that will help.
I simply do not like clones, and I especially don't like to see clones mixed with LEGO
Wow... good eye - you noticed the clone figs, and also the clone bricks mixed in? I don't really like clones either, they were given to me for free when I bought a bunch of LEGO from a friend. I must say, it is a struggle to work with them - the bricks don't want to stay connected to anything. When picking up a building, the whole building threatens to fall to pieces. When placing a fig on a cart, the whole cart will sometimes fall apart.
Still, I wanted an enemy that seemed "foreign" to everyone, that most people wouldn't like, and that would be easy to portray as... ready to die?
The clones seemed perfect. Still, I knew many people would not be too pleased.
It was slightly confusing with all the smilie faces, but soon you get to know their unique clothing, then its allright.
This is something I had not predicted. I even mix them up sometimes! I've had to retake pictures more then once after realizing I took the pic with the wrong fig! Hope it's no too bad. I made most of them with smilies because this is a part of the continent where not many "people" have hairy faces? Does that make sense?
I wonder why everyone is bold?
I made them all without hair because I wanted to emphasize that they were all slaves living in humble surrondings. When the story progresses, I want to let the readers see a development take place. I guess it does look a little weird.
Where did you get the equipment for the soldier in the quarry?
These are all clone sets I got - they came with the figs. I actually like the spears a little.
P.S. - I like the page not found girl
Yea me too.
I was going to make a customized 404 page, but when I saw that, I was like "why bother"?